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misty. by ~NonBeliever:iconNonBeliever:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open


27JUL08 // 1713

misty moment
misty touch
you made me shiver, made me smile

white confusion, keep me going
don't throw me off the path

like a quivering flower i am
in your hands
slowly falling apart

be there
come here
go away

misty blue eyes
drink me
cool me

sleepless night of many words

misty moments
in the cool morning air
hands searching for a touch
skin on skin
hand holding on to sleep

misty songs drifting along the skin
leaving droplets of thought
... feeling
... doubt

misty sun warming my skin
beauty close to suffocation

misty soul
leave the pain
leave those thoughts behind

misty blue eyes
drink me
leave me
don't forget me.
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[feel it : let go // mist // soulmate // hymni nocturnales // breeezin' // close your eyes]

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~Merdahn Jul 28, 2008, 7:52:16 AM
:hug:

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"If the people we love are taken from us, the way they live on is to never stop loving them. Buildings burn, people die, but real love is forever."
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~NonBeliever Jul 28, 2008, 7:56:35 AM
had to get out ... ^_~

how are you today hun?

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°*...... dreamy dreams dreaming in my dream for ever on and on ......*°
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~Merdahn Jul 28, 2008, 8:53:27 AM
Uhhu... Just tell me if I need to pass that one on ;)

Uhmmm well... yeah... I fell asleep yesterday at 21.00 hrs and woke up at... well... 9 the next morning... i'm still feeling a bit fucked up... missing u.. missing my other ppz... but... still... remembering the GOOOD times! ;)

xxx

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"If the people we love are taken from us, the way they live on is to never stop loving them. Buildings burn, people die, but real love is forever."
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~NonBeliever Jul 28, 2008, 11:46:36 AM
i'm not sure .... just needed to capture that night in words. but one could always just stumble across it at some point, right .... ^_~

woooooooow .... i didn't know that you could sleep that long, hun! :aww: hin hin ... i'm thinking about those days too - i just was a darn blast!!!! ^0^

:hug:

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°*...... dreamy dreams dreaming in my dream for ever on and on ......*°
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=andanar Aug 1, 2008, 3:15:41 AM
Strangely....compelling? Disjointed but with emotion. I like.

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~NonBeliever Aug 1, 2008, 4:35:20 AM
you like ... ? if you knew ...

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°*...... dreamy dreams dreaming in my dream for ever on and on ......*°
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=andanar Aug 1, 2008, 4:40:28 AM
I love it. If I knew....?

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~NonBeliever Aug 1, 2008, 5:31:38 AM
aahh, that's for another time ...

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°*...... dreamy dreams dreaming in my dream for ever on and on ......*°
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